I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Hi my name is Crimson and I go to Gisborne Intermediate. I really like that you like soccer because I like soccer too. I learnt that you love playing sports and you have three siblings. Maybe you could add what your goal is for the year.
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Hi my name is Crimson and I go to Gisborne Intermediate.
ReplyDeleteI really like that you like soccer because I like soccer too.
I learnt that you love playing sports and you have three siblings.
Maybe you could add what your goal is for the year.
Thank you Crimson for your comment
DeleteMy goals for this year is to get the year 8 maths cup.