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Friday, 17 May 2019

Sean's Search

Hastily, Jack and John paddled against the ferocious waves. Melissa was holding tightly onto Sean. They were getting closer and closer to shore. Until WHOOSH. An arrow went straight past the boat. King Josh lll had his army firing arrows towards them. They paddled to shore now hundreds of arrows flying towards them. Left Sean in the boat and pushed it out into the rough river. Hours later an old man found Sean crying on the shore next to the rigid boat.

19 years later. Sean was having a great life in the town. Everyone was nice happy and caring. Until “CHARGE”. The sound of hoofs was heard and King Josh lll was raiding the village. Sean was trying to run when King Josh lll came racing over. “Give me all you have.” He demanded. “Hold on, you look familiar. Ah yes your Mellisa’s son aren’t you. I was wondering if I would find you.” Swiftly, Sean got up kicked the horses leg and ran. He ran and ran and didn’t stop. Sean eventually took refuge in  cave hoping nobody would find him. Angrily, Sean paced the cave for hours thinking about his parents. He came to the conclusion that they were dead. Planning how he would get his revenge Sean was lighting a fire. Then he drifted to sleep.

In the mourning, Sean started to journey towards king Josh’s kingdom. Days later he reached the humongous castle. There were towers everywhere and guards everywhere. Quickly,  Sean jumped into a covered wagon and slipped into the castle when he got out. The guards immediately grabbed him and took him to their king. Although being grabbed by the guards Sean arrived at the kings room having slain the guards. Sean barged through the door to find the king ready to fight him. Sean picked up a sword from a suit of armour on the wall and they fought. The battle went on for hours but eventually Sean dealt a devastating blow piercing the kings arm. The king surrender and Sean was left to kill him. “Before you kill me what is it that you desired.” Asked the king curiously. “ What I want is to avenge my family!” Shouted Sean. “I didn’t kill them Spear me and I will take you to their cell.”...

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  3. Louis followed all the plans apart from the last one when they happily ever after. But I still think it was a great story. It was very detailed and I loved it from Drew.

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    1. Thanks I just ran out of time to finish the story.

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