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Friday, 10 May 2019

15 minute writing

Quietly, we snuck out of the window. We snuck out to the garden then. “Ay what ya doin out here!” Shouted a man with an Australian accent. We scampered off as fast as cheetah’s. Down the hill, through the bush and onto the beach.

Sadly, lobsters are adored by humans for their taste. Hence being in the position we were just in. Only three of us got out. My brother Fred My friend Greg and me were the only ones of dozens to get away. Then I saw something red limping towards us. Luckily, it was my sister Jess. “I was in the middle of being cut up, when the do swung open!” She panted. “A plump lady walked in and started shouting...” “How could you let them get away! We can’t serve dinner unless we have 47 roasted lobsters…”

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