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Friday, 30 August 2019

15 Minute Writing

We are learning how to write essays in our class. We had to write a letter to the author of an argument about if cats or dogs are better. This is my letter.

Dear Author

I completely agree that cats are superior to dogs. My dog poop all over the back lawn and occasionally in my house. Whereas I don’t even know what my cats poop looks like. And there is the terrible smell.

The smell is really revolting. Its so strong sometimes I cant even find the source. It could be any where. And when I find the source I panic “WHAT DO I DO WITH IT!” Then when I finally dispose of it. THE SMELL STICKS AROUND! For what feels like hours. Dogs have little care about there personal hygiene.

Dogs will roll in the mud, play in the rain, eat every thing and they still just waltz inside as if the house is meant to be muddy and wet and have random things lying around. Cats on the other hand don’t leave a speck of dirt on them (even if it means licking themselves. But the noise that dogs can make…

It is so loud! There will be something stupid like another dog on TV or  bird outside and all of a sudden… BARK! BARK! BARK! SHHHHHHH!!!!!

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