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Wednesday, 4 December 2019

SLJ Teaser Week Day 1 Activity 1

1 comment:

  1. Kia Ora Louis,

    What a stellar job you have done on your profile page about Taylor Swift! I like the facts you have included as well as the bonus fact about her latest album. You’ve done an incredible job mixing text with images and the result is brilliant.

    Have you considered making the text a little bigger to fill in the page a bit more?

    I really like Taylor’s songs. My favourite of hers is ‘Love Story’. What songs of hers do you like? Are there any other singers who you really like?

    Hei konā mai,
    Shannon

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