I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
What a stellar job you have done on your profile page about Taylor Swift! I like the facts you have included as well as the bonus fact about her latest album. You’ve done an incredible job mixing text with images and the result is brilliant.
Have you considered making the text a little bigger to fill in the page a bit more?
I really like Taylor’s songs. My favourite of hers is ‘Love Story’. What songs of hers do you like? Are there any other singers who you really like?
Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments. Positive - something done well Thoughtful - a sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Kia Ora Louis,
ReplyDeleteWhat a stellar job you have done on your profile page about Taylor Swift! I like the facts you have included as well as the bonus fact about her latest album. You’ve done an incredible job mixing text with images and the result is brilliant.
Have you considered making the text a little bigger to fill in the page a bit more?
I really like Taylor’s songs. My favourite of hers is ‘Love Story’. What songs of hers do you like? Are there any other singers who you really like?
Hei konā mai,
Shannon