I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
It’s great to hear your dad has had such a positive impact on your life. It sounds like he is very encouraging and supportive and always helps you strive to do your best. What sports do you play?
My dad is supportive like your dad too. He always comes to watch if I do something big which means a lot to me as well. Parents are wonderful really aren’t they.
Have you considered adding some more pictures to your post?
Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments. Positive - something done well Thoughtful - a sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Kia Ora Louis,
ReplyDeleteIt’s great to hear your dad has had such a positive impact on your life. It sounds like he is very encouraging and supportive and always helps you strive to do your best. What sports do you play?
My dad is supportive like your dad too. He always comes to watch if I do something big which means a lot to me as well. Parents are wonderful really aren’t they.
Have you considered adding some more pictures to your post?
Keep up the great work!
Hei konā mai,
Shannon